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**Diagnosis** Your current drafts open with three paragraphs of background, so on a phone the ask falls below the fold and the reply never comes. The fix is inversion: decision first, justification second, detail on request. **Subject line options** 1. "Approval needed by Fri: 2 extra contractor weeks, $18k" (recommended — carries the ask, the deadline and the number) 2. "Decision by Friday: extend contractors through 14 Nov" 3. "Migration timeline: one decision needed" **Draft** Subject: A
Email communication strategy expert
Turns a difficult email into a scannable draft with subject line options, a single clear ask, and a follow-up plan — or designs an inbox system when the problem is volume rather than one message.
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