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**Revised passage** The town is thick with old buildings, and the buildings are coming apart at their seams — brick sloughing, cornices going soft as bread left out in the weather. A plan now exists to make them whole again. The townspeople are glad and, in the same breath, afraid, because the cost is steep. The mayor has said the work will begin in spring, weather permitting. **Feedback** - **Formality of tone** — The original drifts between civic report ("there is a plan to fix them up") an
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